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中博考研:英语大作文精彩句子盘点,跌破阅卷老师眼球

原标题:中博考研:英语大作文精彩句子盘点,跌破阅卷老师眼球

好句子

作文模板背得滚瓜烂熟,但一到写自己需要填充的内容的时候,就一脸懵逼。

华丽的模板句式用得风生水起,但一到下笔描述图片内容的时候,就毕露原形。

相信不少同学都面临这样的窘境,考研在即,作文还有救吗?不要方,万能的小龙来帮您~

句子是文章的基础,句子质量的高低直接影响文章的好坏。写作要达到更高境界,必须在句子层面下功夫。

接下来,让我们一起来看一下好句子具有的一些特点。

特点一:整体性

句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二:连贯性

句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三:准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四:重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "don't move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "don't move!"

特点五:语法正确,句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。

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