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直播 | 阅读和2019南京一模作文指导

原标题:直播 | 阅读和2019南京一模作文指导

说句心里话

我是大雨老师,今晚直播写作的时候忘记了录播(技术员周一会恢复),所以我这里写成书面文字。既然要做到日更,就要努力做到。

本次直播的阅读指导视频链接(可以直接看)

https://www.cctalk.com/v/15472908053851?xh_fshareuid=5d0e26f4-5bc4-a7c7-01a9-6186e082db16&xh_preshareid=f8bdad6b-291b-4232-af49-80d391bef91d

题目

Cultural programs still occupy an important position in the TV market. From The Chinese Poetry Competition, toLetters AlivetoNational Treasure, high-quality shows focusing on Chinese culture achieve high ratings. This year, Everlasting Classics, which invites pop stars to sing songs adapted from ancient poems in every episode, has become a hit. It was first aired on CCTV during the Spring Festival this year and has a rating of 8.9 out of 10 on Douban.com.

Have you ever heard of the poem The Leek Flowers (苔)by Yuan Mei of Qing Dynasty?

Where the sun does not arrive,

Springtime does on its own thrive.

The leek flowers as rice tiny,

Eager to bloom like the peony(牡丹).

In fact, the poem has been sleeping for three hundred years. It appeared to the world again. On February 16th, 2018, Liang Jun and his students took part in the program Everlasting Classicson CCTV.They together performed the beautiful song The Leek Flowers, which moved tens of thousands of people in front of the TV. When talking about the reason why Liang chose the poem The Leek Flowers, he said that he hoped his students could learn something important from the silent leek flowers: no matter how hard the life is, we should try to reveal the most beautiful scenery in our heart. That is just what Yuan Mei wanted to express in the little poem. Always remember that life will be in its blooming season sooner or later and what you need to do now is to accept enough wind and rain and snow as well to get ready for it.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词概述上面短文的主要内容;

2. 用约120个单词就“推广中华传统文化的创新方式”这一话题发表你的看法。

(1) 阐述你对上文中推广中华文化的方式的看法(至少两点);

(2) 结合自身实际,谈谈你是如何学习与推广中华文化。

写作步骤

必看

一、如何写概括:

首先要看准文体,本文一上来就是介绍一种现象,然后举例,明确这是说明文。这种带有新闻特征的说明文大体有以下语篇标准(discourse mark)

主题关键词:Cultural programs( occupy an important position = achieve high ratings= become a hit)

怎么改写:一般现象类的分为两类:好、忧。即:popular, concern

接下来的段落必然是具体解释现象,又可分为:举例、评价。本文是举例,常用的句式是:one typical example is …

例子只要写:某人做了某事即可,其它细节一律不要。

本文的例子梗概是:

Liang Jun and his students took part in the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV.

于是就开始写吧:

The TV market plays an important role in promoting Chinese culture. One typical example is the poem, The Leek Flowers, sung by Liang Jun and his students on CCTV.

二、正文

要点一:阐述你对上文中推广中华文化的方式的看法(至少两点)

第一句是表白:Undoubtedly, it contributes a lot to the spreading of traditional culture.

第二句是拓展:By combining modern elements of entertainment with traditional culture, it can arouse the public curiosity and interest, bringing back to life the seemingly forgotten wisdom.

注意:一定要结合材料,千万不要天马行空。

第三句可以自由发挥一下:从知识的角度,但凡说知识,很多同学都是learn a lot,其实有很多种更好的表达,请看:

In addition, the new ways of interpreting traditional culture can add a new dimension to one's perspective, gaining him deeper insightin it.

整合起来:

Undoubtedly, it contributes a lot to the spreading of traditional culture. By combining modern elements of entertainment with traditional culture, it can arouse the public curiosity and interest, bringing back to life the seemingly forgotten wisdom. In addition, the new ways of interpreting traditional culture can add a new dimension to one's perspective, gaining him deeper insight in it.

要点二:结合自身实际,谈谈你是如何学习与推广中华文化。

这种文化话题,事先要多积累思维方式。注意:很多同学只知道积累词块,却忘记了思维的方式也需要多积累。这就和数学题一样,一些解题方法是要积累的。

一般分为:

1、举办各种活动

2、提高相关意识

3、设立法律和规章

但是,这里请留意:结合自身实际

As to me, I have made it a habit totranslate Chinese poems into English and Japanese in my spare time. To my surprise, they appeal to many foreigners (为什么)because my works remove the language barrier,(那又如何?)giving foreigners easy access to them. Besides, I have held some cultural activities (你不能写到这里就戛然而止,那样和不写没有多大区别,要增加举例细节)where foreigners can experience Chinese culture by themselves and appreciate its beauty from the bottom of their heart.

I hope each individual can do his part in promoting Chinese culture. Only in this way can Chinese culture flourishin every corner of the world.

试卷范文:

Aimed at promoting Chinese culture, cultural programs are highly favored by CCTV. The poem “The Leek Flowers”has become a household name owing to the performance of Liang Jun and his students on CCTV. (34 words)

There’s nothing ambiguous that they are innovative ways to spread Chinese traditional culture. The combination of knowledge and entertainment makes the programs so appealing to audiences, thus making it easier for people to accept the essence of nation’s culture. In addition, a very hot TV program can attract more and more public attention about Chinese traditional culture, which in turn motivates people to learn more.

I truly appreciate Chinese classic works, especially Chinese poetry. Every day I recite poems and write down the beautiful sentences. Inspired by the wisdom of them, I post my articles online and introduce Chinese culture through active involvement in school activities.

To spread Chinese culture to the world is our responsibility. Let’s start taking positive action to fulfill the mission.(124 words)

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