托福口语分数想提高?你真的好好研究过自己说了啥么?

原标题:托福口语分数想提高?你真的好好研究过自己说了啥么?

一些同学在备考托福口语的时候发现:自己练了半天并没什么实质提高,虽然感觉该说的都说了,为啥分数就是上不去呢?

关于这个问题,让我们看一道具体的题目和对应答案:

Task 1:18岁能投票吗?

来听下这个答案:

听了上面的答案,按照口语原始分0-4来打分的话,你觉得能得多少分呢?

下面张智勇老师就为大家带来这个答案的详细点评:

Well as far as I am concerned, I think eighteen years old are mature enough(发音不准,造成歧义)to vote. Because before age 18, they have already(发音不准造成歧义)participated in variety of party activities(伪事实,大多未成年人没有参加政党活动的经历)and they know the difference between the each party, like what is the democrats(发音不清楚)and what is the federalist. And since they can distinguish between the difference(语法错误)and they know what they are doing are for the importance(表意模糊), like the development of the country(发音不准). I think they are able to vote and I don’t think even 16 years old can vote (我的原来的意思是I think even 16 years old can vote,表意与主题相悖) and there is a lot of news about those young kids stand for the leaders they want to choose for the like the election(卡顿,表意不清).

而从具体打分来看,张老师给不同方面给出了详细的打分(0-4分):

语调 intonation 3
发音 pronunciation 3
流畅 flow 3
词汇 vocabulary 3.5
语法 grammar 3
话题发展 Topic development 2.5
结合 cohesion 2.5
总分 2.93

对应到30分的换算话,这个Task1的分数水平大约在22-23分之间。

看完Task1,我们再来听一道Task4综合口语的答案:

觉得这个回答怎么样?以下是张老师的点评:

According to the lecture the professor explain two ways in which display behavior can help animals maintain group unity.

The first one is the threatening behavior, for example, when there is two(严格来讲,书面语法不当)baboons see the same food. The first one(发音不准)will see uh will stare at the another one and make some threatening sound(发音不饱满), the grounds(听错词了). And another(用词不当)animals, another baboon will understand this and avoid this fight. And they will just give up with this food(表意严重错误,与听力原文不符).

And second uh behavior is the reconcile that After some physical conflicts happened. Like when there is two(再次错)baboons finally go to a physical fight. after this fight. One baboon will approach another one with some friendly sounds with some friendly noise and uh hug another one(用词不当), and in the end the conflicts will resolve and au the group can unify again .

再来看张老师的打分:

语调 intonation 3.5
发音 pronunciation 3.5
流畅 flow 4
词汇 vocabulary 3.5
语法 grammar 3
话题发展 Topic development 3
结合 cohesion 3
总分 3.36

所以上面Task4的答案是26-27分的水平。

看了上面的点评与打分,大家对如何优化这个口语答案是不是心里更有数了呢?

看到这里,是不是希望自己的口语回答也能获得一次这样详细的点评?机会来了!

张智勇老师将在11月18-21日开设托福口语精批课限量只有12个名额,先到先得!

报名此课程你将获得:

▲ 托福口语核心答题技巧

▲ 8段口语答案精批

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