手握Chatgpt:怎么写高考应用文的“活动/经历+感悟/收获”?

短文类写作,在近三年的高考中是比较突出的,下面看高考题,或许我们能看出什么道道来:

(2020·全国卷II)上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受

(2021·新高考I卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。

(2022·浙江)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括:

1.回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。

我们不难看出,个人经历和感受或收获是命题人特别青睐的。这点在不少最近的模拟题里也得到体现了。

不过很遗憾的是,很多写作范文过于模板化,虽然也能拿到12分,但要达到13,14分,那几乎是不可能的。

满分的作文必须带有语言的灵气,地道、自然是必须的。而国人包括我自己写的应用文过于僵化,过于迎合评分要求,而最终让人觉得千篇一律,显得很是做作。而Chatgpt是基于地道的英语文化context,语言地道简洁且生动,很是值得我们学习。

下面我给这三篇提供范文,此范文是我让Chatgpt对每一个题目写至少十篇范文,然后我结合国内应试作文的阅卷要求来进行优点整合,经过仔细阅读范文,我总结以下:

总结这几个必用句式:

环境描写:

As we stepped intothe orchard, we were greeted bythe sweet fragrance of ripe peaches, apples, and pears, begging to be plucked.

劳动描写:

With baskets in hand, we set out on our picking journey.It was a symphony of nature, with every fruit plucked striking a chord of happiness. Task finished, we were still absorbed in thehappiness of harvest.

感受描写:

Personally, not only did the experience allow me a chance toget close to nature,but I couldtaste the sweetness of labour. It was a day well spent, with memories to cherish for a lifetime.

The festival was not just about the cultural exchange, but also about the personal growth and understanding that came with it. I did broaden my perspective on the world.

回忆中的经历描写:

I still remember the first time I picked up a copy, feeling excited by its appealing stories. Reading it has become a part of my daily routine, providing me with a window to the world and expanding my horizons.

The memories of our time together are still vivid in my mind.

As I recall the event, I can't help but smile at the memories ofour conversations, learning about each other's cultures, and exploring the various activities and exhibitions.

本文作为我的新书《新高考英语写作王中王 读后续写》的配套《应用文写作王中王》的部分,此部分我把最可能考的主题分为七个,每个主题下3篇范文加语言规律总结。本周五在我的微店销售,我会公布。微店二维码如下;

完整如下:

(2020年,全国卷II)

上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受

Last weekend, my classmates and I had a wonderful time at a pick-your-own-fruit farm.

As we stepped intothe orchard, we were greeted bythe sweet fragrance of ripe peaches, apples, and pears, begging to be plucked. With baskets in hand, we set out on our picking journey.It was a symphony of nature, with every fruit plucked striking a chord of happiness. Task finished, we were still absorbed in thehappiness of harvest.

Personally, not only did the experience allow me a chance toget close to nature,but I couldtaste the sweetness of labour. It was a day well spent, with memories to cherish for a lifetime.

2021年新高考I卷

你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。

As a devoted reader of the Youth newspaper, I am thrilled to celebrate its 10th anniversary. I still remember the first time I picked up a copy, feeling excited by its appealing stories. Reading it has become a part of my daily routine, providing me with a window to the world and expanding my horizons.

Among the many sections, my favorite is "Global Insight," which introduces me to different cultures and perspectives, with its unique writing style, vivid, engaging and thought-provoking.

I extend my warmest wishes to Youth, expecting it to continue to educate and entertain, to inspire and to enlighten. May it keep shining like a beacon of knowledge, illuminating the path for future generations.

(2022·浙江)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括:

1. 回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。

Dear Chris,

I hope this email finds you well. I can't believe it has already been a few weeks since our encounter at the "China-Ireland Cultural Festival." The memories of our time together are still vivid in my mind.

As I recall the event, I can't help but smile at the memories ofour conversations, learning about each other's cultures, and exploring the various activities and exhibitions. The festival was not just about the cultural exchange, but also about the personal growth and understanding that came with it. I did broaden my perspective on the world.

I hope that despite the distance, we can stay in touch and continue our friendship.

Best regards,

Li Hua

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